Erectronik's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dead Loch]

Nice Synths!! and melody!!

man i like your synths, i duno how you do that in fruity!! it would great if you could show me!! actually i use reason 2.5 now heh, but keep up the great work! i really like those high squarish synthlines and melody!

noxious890 responds:

haha thanks...accually for this song i did also use reason. its the greatest thing. im getting into cubase and project5 as we speak but its alot more complicate...not as fun as Fl. The synths i rendered in other programs and resampled then to reason. ill send some to you if you want..just email me.

[How I Left It]

ok i guess..

The synths in this song is good, but it gets quite monotonous at times, you should keep a consistent and recognizable beat, i keep losing track of rhythm at times, (dont use hats like they are in the song rite now) have a a kick on every beat of the bar or something, that's standard for general tpyes of techno. Also, sometimes the filter gets a little too dull for the synth to sound good.

lupedog responds:

thanks man, I need some constructive critisisum.

[Winter Forest at Dusk full v.]

Honestly a good electronic piece of work

i like the beginning icy stabbing like synth, u should automate with some kind a filter, i like the pad that comes along next, and that lo freq sound that comes up next. Plus the beat is wicked! but try to create a buildup, if you have fruity, use a stretched reverse crash or something. the bass in the middle part is good, just turn the volume up a little, and that would please my ear greatly! honestly, when i looked at the charts, yours was like 15 or soemthing, but all the 5.00 ones were the same people who uploaded everything at once, and a couple hours later, heh there gone down. I really liked yours compared to those, this truly deserves a high rank!

quebecman responds:

oh... well theres a little problem... When I exported it, I wanted to save the file but accidently pressed "no" so now I got to remake the middle and ending part... but thanx for your review!

[Newstuff]

Nice guitar rhythm

hehe i remember those TS404 synth lines and wavetable! and the "pack" drums haha, u should try to use the fruity slicer's capabilities more. I like that guitar synth too, its awesome, i would like to know what device u used there and FX! also the scratch in the begining is crazy! good stuff man

DJ-Mann responds:

Thanx

[Runnin Not Hiding (PERFECT)]

transitions are important

you need to have more variety within the melodies. with only a melody, there can be no harmony, try adding a bass to go with the synth. Try automating the cuttoff with your main synth, youll get a NICE roland synth there. and the transitions should be blended smoothly(like some hats and crashes and reverse acoustics leading to momental climaxes.

Bob-is-Gawd responds:

Sure, i couldn't really find a good climax so i just did the Power Synth at the end... i knew that wasn't i good cut off...

thanks for the advice

[Change your socks]

good shiz man

seems like u didnt try, but nevertheless, very good! good bass mixed, very clever melody too. nice scratchin too!

[Change your boxers]

hey sup anders

nice does remind me of daily undie change(like having problems cuz u cant fit in them) haha i gave u no effort cause ive seen u werk haha but goo job man its cool.

Tub70 responds:

Cool thanks. il be comming out with more just as soon as the stupid teacher opens the complab more often