Sick ass beat!
The beat is heavy and well put together, the saw synths complement the bass line and the filtered lighter percussions certainly go well with the song. This track definitely sounds like it could be something from The Matrix or something similar!
5/5, Downloaded
Erectronik
Well written melody
This piece has an excellent melody, it grabs my attention and has a distinct feeling leaning towards a darker mood and tone. Although it is mostly parallel polyphonic(2), the melody still keeps the song going, although a cello a lower bass instrument should compliment the piece to harmony. This song shows potential and ask if you would like to do a collab with me if you are using Reason 3.0, and check out my song "Destroying Heaven"
Im still using FL Demo sooo yeah i cant collab yet
Cool hardcore sounds
This sounds like something very dirty nitty gritty, kinda like aphex twin or NiN i guess, but more melodic with the bassline? The volume is a bit loud and clips, and you should add a compressor on top of that, cause its almost way too loud. I wouldn't be too sure if this would be under the goth genre, but then again, theres nothing else you could put this in eh? I can hear the distant guitar FL sample, which makes the sound a bit cliche, but overall, a well arranged track.
Erectronik
Very nice song, just some mastering needed
This is a well layed out track the intro brings the piece in quite well, but the leading melody sound needs to be brought out more, and if possible, make the distortion more aggressive sounding, I'm assuming you have a rack of mixers, EQs, Reverbs, and stuff. Bring out the higher range of frequencies for the guitar, and apply a compressor on the vocals, as some parts it gets to loud, and through the track, it tends to drown out the excellent guitar work. I'm waiting to see this piece finished soon, with my tips of course :)
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Great piece of work
Very professionaly done and commercial sounding :) This stands out from regular DnB, there is an actual interesting melody that accompanies the drum and fills. The only thing, like sadspoon said, is the empty 2 step beat going on. It's great that you varied the beat every now and then, but you really need to work in some furious little snares and hats between the main kick and snares.
However, the pads are great, and this sounds like a great fusion of the Trance and the DnB genres. I would really like to see this up on tomorrows weekly favourites :)
I wish it luck
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Sick track!
I like this track, it comes in with a wicked distorted and filtered intro, and then you drop in some sick breakbeat techno beat! Love it XD! Suggestions for the section where you used strings: increase the attack and relase of the strings, and add a slight reverb + delay. Also lower the volume of the strings, because they overwhelm the underlying synth which I like, and feel it should come out more, and will make that section less repetitive. Also add a compressor on to the snares to give it more "punch" and "oomph"
[5/5]
Downloaded.
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10x again for the review. I'll check out your work, promise. But unfortunately the answer is the same like the one given to Voyd. Maybe I'll try to fix it one day but I think it'll take a lot of time. Actually I uploaded this to see opinions for it. I don't think I'll ever be able to be as patient as I have to be in order to fix the piece. Thanks again for the review. I'll check your stuff now.
Peace.
this track..
LOL are u serious?? 10 for originality :)
LOL WTF OMG BBQ IM TEH SERIOUSNESS LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOL PM BANNED FOR MAKING FUN OF ME LOL JUST TEH KINDINGSNESS
lol!
hahaha this song is fo funny, LEEEEROOOOOOY JENKINS!! the sound quality is kinda fuzzed down, but nonetheless.. LOL!!
Drum and bass??
I think this is in a wrong genre entirely, you should check out the other Drum and Bass songs first next time, anyways, it seems to me that this song was assembled entirely on loops. the thing is, I would add some maniacal tribal shouting, yelling, stabbing, spearing :p etc you get what I mean. The way some loops come in, it seems to random. I would also suggest adding some pads on top of the drums to add some richness and ambience to it.
well i just thought of loops is all for music of an indian tribe. be sure to check oout my audio and ill try to find some vocals and pads that will work for my drums, if i don't i'm being lazy,
Nice work, some suggestions..
I think this piece is great, and has room for much potential development. I can hear the the "distant" sound effect and the basic kick sound from FL. The compression you have put on the distant sound is an excellent use of compression, but the reverb needs to be gated to cut out in some parts from muddening the parts following it too much. The hi-hat is also noticeable, that it is from the basic FL library. I recommend that you should get a new sample library, either buying one or getting a free download from some website. I think the bass needs to be changed to a heavyier thick "wubbing" sound.
Don't take the criticism too harshly now, the wasp and TB303 sounds you have are great, the EQ and compression just need to be pushed up one more level, keep up the great work!
Kay. That's not quite the basic kick from FL, I got a different sample :p
'Sa good idea to gate the sounds to keep them from bleeding over, I'll keep that in mind. Hihat... yeah... any suggestions?
Bass wubbing, sure, why not, I'll try that out.
Wasp- didn't use wasp :D
and TB303- also not used. :D
Most of those sounds I created in Sytrus , a 3xOsc, and Crystal.
Yeah, I needs my old sample library back- that much has become painufully apparent. I wants me reason back.
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