Nice fusion of genres
I'd say I could hear a bit of acid in there as well, and the melodic lines go well together, and there is clearly j-pop influenced trance leads and some well planned metal riffs with it. The one thing that bugs me is the sample used for the metal guitar; if you had it multisampled (to lower pitch ranges) it would have sounded better. Also there needs to be a bit more diversity, adding sections of chorus and verses, maybe bridges in between them, and variations between verses and choruses, to add interest.
In your next song, I would definitely like to see more interesting works like this.
Erectronik (you reviewed me a long time ago, I'm just gettin back to returning the favour)